11.17 Statement Draft

Opening Paragraph
I have read 《The Architect's Interior Design》. This book mainly introduces the interior design works of some architectural designers, which introduces their design methods and design concepts in detail. Architectural design and interior design are combined with all kinds of conditions here, with the current technology, the application of the then aesthetic advocacy, through the physical space to build a predetermined visual expression and feelings, reflecting the human style, historical trends and other comprehensive window. In my opinion, good architectural design and interior design is a perceptual field, which requires more life perception and artistic accomplishment. I often read books in this field, and LIKE to take reading notes and sort out the materials I like. I want to explore more possibilities of man and space, and the fluid relationship between multiple fields of internal and external environment.

Middle Paragraph
During my study in CSM Foundation, I have been exposed to many new design methods, which have exercised my ability of independent research and how to transform art into design. I like to combine my creative freedom and skills with practical problem solving to stimulate human emotions.
In my opinion, space is the carrier of things, and interior is not only attached to the original internal space, but also needs to create different spatial functions and feelings according to the re-planning and design of space. Such feelings depend on the design of objects and overlap with architecture and art. The space itself, from the study of spatial scale, ratio, shape, light, texture, material and color of all interior design elements in the space of people's experience and spiritual feelings.

Final Paragraph
When I was in high school, I participated in the innovative practice project organized by the school, and the thesis and design results of the project "Preliminary Study on Waterfront Cafe Design Based on Leisure Concept" and "Discussion on The Design development of Waterfront Cafe With Leisure Concept" were recognized by Tutor Li Bojun and obtained the certificate.
I like painting, traveling, photography and watching exhibitions, which enable me to accumulate my own unique ideas on beauty and spatial thinking. I am good at viewing problems from different perspectives, analyzing and solving problems.

Which areas need to be improved?

Where have you left space to write about your Part 2 Projects in detail?

What did you receive feedback on?

Where does this writing make points that relate to your aims for Part 2?

I think my first paragraph should mention what contemporary practitioners/trends excite you, like designers I love. Describe my motivation and what I hope to learn from the course. Besides undergraduate study, I have other dreams. Give examples of some extra-curricular activities/achievements, which may also be technical (e.g., drawing) or transferable skills (e.g., leadership) and demonstrate each skill.
I will probably give some details about my second part project in the second paragraph.
The feedback I have received so far is that I should mention more about what I have learned in the foundation, because this is the most relevant qualification I have.
In the first paragraph, I mentioned my goal: I want to explore more possibilities between people and space, and the fluid relationship between multiple fields of internal and external environment.

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